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Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/5/2009, 1:55 pm

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/The-Good-Witch-Of-The-North-135990212

Here we are! Please be nice when giving constructive criticism!
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by archiesangel on 9/5/2009, 1:58 pm

Cute =)
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Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/5/2009, 2:04 pm

archiesangel wrote:Cute =)

Thank u!
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Post by archiesangel on 9/5/2009, 2:11 pm

thewizardofodd12 wrote:
archiesangel wrote:Cute =)

Thank u!

Your welcome!
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Post by ~Angel~ on 9/5/2009, 2:39 pm

nice pic.
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/5/2009, 2:43 pm

Dark~Angel~ wrote:nice pic.

Thank u! :D
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by Vandal on 9/5/2009, 9:02 pm

Uhh.. Are you asking for constructive criticism?
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/5/2009, 10:09 pm

Mercy wrote:Uhh.. Are you asking for constructive criticism?

yeah but be nice.
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by Vandal on 9/5/2009, 11:27 pm

thewizardofodd12 wrote:
Mercy wrote:Uhh.. Are you asking for constructive criticism?

yeah but be nice.

Do you know how hard it is to be nice in Constructive Criticism? It's easier to take a crap with your asshole superglued!
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/5/2009, 11:55 pm

Mercy wrote:
thewizardofodd12 wrote:
Mercy wrote:Uhh.. Are you asking for constructive criticism?

yeah but be nice.

Do you know how hard it is to be nice in Constructive Criticism? It's easier to take a crap with your asshole superglued!
lol then tell me what i need to work on!
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 12:43 am

okay.. looking at it, it looks like it's supposed to be cartoony, so I'll just leave proportions out of this, I'm going to talk about your color scheme, character design and details.

So the Wizard of Oz is your inspiration for this piece hence your SN and the name "Good Witch of the North" looking at the colors it does look pretty good. If I were to design something unrelated and I had to include lavender I would also go with a choice of the other cool colors you chose. I would have more of an array of colors but otherwise its okay.

Now the design. Yep, she looks like a witch. Or a princess and a witch put together. Okay the only thing that makes her look like a witch is the hat. The "N" wand is okay cause the witch has it but not so poorly designed. I would keep the N the same color as the rod itself. And she doesn't need the N on her witch hat. We kinda understand who she is, but if you were gonna have the N on her hat and wand why not her belt? Or anywhere else for that matter? Her hair could have been longer.

There could have been shades and your details are strange. The cloth wrinkles on her skirt don't follow up, her hair has details very little, at least you did a good job at portraying curly hair with very little details. Lastly, why focus on boobs?

Overall, its good for a start, so keep it up and draw every day.
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/6/2009, 1:37 pm

Mercy wrote:okay.. looking at it, it looks like it's supposed to be cartoony, so I'll just leave proportions out of this, I'm going to talk about your color scheme, character design and details.

So the Wizard of Oz is your inspiration for this piece hence your SN and the name "Good Witch of the North" looking at the colors it does look pretty good. If I were to design something unrelated and I had to include lavender I would also go with a choice of the other cool colors you chose. I would have more of an array of colors but otherwise its okay.

Now the design. Yep, she looks like a witch. Or a princess and a witch put together. Okay the only thing that makes her look like a witch is the hat. The "N" wand is okay cause the witch has it but not so poorly designed. I would keep the N the same color as the rod itself. And she doesn't need the N on her witch hat. We kinda understand who she is, but if you were gonna have the N on her hat and wand why not her belt? Or anywhere else for that matter? Her hair could have been longer.

There could have been shades and your details are strange. The cloth wrinkles on her skirt don't follow up, her hair has details very little, at least you did a good job at portraying curly hair with very little details. Lastly, why focus on boobs?

Overall, its good for a start, so keep it up and draw every day.

I will try to work on this. BTW She was the original good witch of the north from the first oz book
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Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 1:53 pm

i know of the series (I think everyone does) but I never read any books.

What's a teenage boy like yourself doing reading the wizard of oz and watching teen titans? They're like completely 2 different things!
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Post by Laughing_Man on 9/6/2009, 2:09 pm

Mercy wrote:
What's a teenage boy like yourself doing reading the wizard of oz and watching teen titans? They're like completely 2 different things!

People are allowed varied interests Mercy Razz
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/6/2009, 2:15 pm

Laughing_Man wrote:
Mercy wrote:
What's a teenage boy like yourself doing reading the wizard of oz and watching teen titans? They're like completely 2 different things!

People are allowed varied interests Mercy Razz

Thank you, laugh. Yes i have read the oz books. So wat? I happen to like witches and wizards. So wat if i am 15? I like wat i like.
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Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 2:23 pm

i dunno>> i just find that to be a strange combination >_<
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/6/2009, 4:58 pm

Mercy wrote:i dunno>> i just find that to be a strange combination >_<
yes it is.
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Art Of A Wizard

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/22/2009, 8:15 pm

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/Nightcrawler-137927060 My version of nightcrawler.

http://www.deviantart.com/users/outgoing?http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.jinxville.com/illustration/nightcrawler.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.jinxville.com/illustration/nightcrawler.htm&usg=__2p6fDIRuaavfwSZAHsexElT-u8A=&h=707&w=500&sz=69&hl=en heres the thing i traced. I edited it a little.
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by Vandal on 9/23/2009, 11:34 am

Don't you already have a topic named the same exact thing?

Why didn't you just post this in your old topic?

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Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/23/2009, 2:36 pm

Mercy wrote:Don't you already have a topic named the same exact thing?

Why didn't you just post this in your old topic?

Cause i didnt feel like it.
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Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/25/2009, 3:03 pm

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/Nightcrawler-2-138133162 Once again i drew nightcrawler but this time i filled it.
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Post by thewizardofodd12 on 9/25/2009, 3:07 pm

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/Nightcrawler-2-138133162 Once again i drew nightcrawler but this time i filled it.
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by Bass_so_low on 10/15/2009, 10:26 pm

i need to puke out my dinner before i critique this...
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Re: OZ Art. AGAIN

Post by Vandal on 10/16/2009, 1:26 pm

Bass_so_low wrote:i need to puke out my dinner before i critique this...

Don't forget to be nice XD

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Art Of A Wizard:RE

Post by thewizardofodd12 on 11/30/2009, 4:15 pm

I have done all the Oz witches. Behold.

The witch of the north again.

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/The-Good-Witch-Of-The-North-Oz-145303972

The Wicked witch of the west.

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/The-Wicked-Witch-of-the-West-145304924

The Wicked witch of the east.

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/The-Wicked-Witch-of-the-East-145307127

Glinda the good witch of the south

http://thewizardofodd12.deviantart.com/art/Glinda-The-Good-145307788
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