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My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Rinisa on 11/12/2009, 9:43 pm

A poem about a saying I've heard...(Some complain roses have thorns, others rejoice that thorns have roses.)

Raven the Rose

Raven is rose.
Pretty, and love adorned
But if she's the girl you chose,
Careful. Every rose has a thorn.

If Raven was simply a rose,
It'd be terrible, don't you know?
Always happy, and beauty grows
Near perfection, complete with a halo.

But what is perfection?
Never sad? Never dreary?
Now pay attention.
I would rather have a friend who grew weary,
who wasn't always of joy,
sometimes even eerie.
who sometimes worried about a boy.

But of course, perfection isn't possible
And for that, I am thankful.

But what if she was all a thorn?
Not much fun either, I bet.
All she'd do is cry and scorn.
Never happy, always upset.

Not enjoyable either, now you see.
But, you're still thinking,aren't you?
How is Raven a rose, what possibility?
For those who don't know, I'll happily show.

Raven is smart.
Kind as well.
She has a big heart,
and is not your common belle.

With intentions sweet,
and words sometimes unkind,
Raven can do any amazing feat.
I'm glad, she's a friend of mine.

Every rose has a thorn,
every thorn a rose,
Always there to scorn,
But always there with praise she bestows.


For those who don't get it, I'm saying how everybody has a good side and a bad side. But it doesn't matter, as long as you keep them balanced. I chose Raven because, she was only born to be a portal but was still hopeful, and happy (Even if she hid it.) I hope you liked it, as I don't think it came out that well.


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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by EllaMila1 on 11/13/2009, 1:33 pm

abreu7 wrote:
Raven the Rose

Raven is rose.
Pretty, and love adorned
But if she's the girl you chose,
Careful. Every rose has a thorn.

If Raven was simply a rose,
It'd be terrible, don't you know?
Always happy, and beauty grows
Near perfection, complete with a halo.

But what is perfection?
Never sad? Never dreary?
Now pay attention.
I would rather have a friend who grew weary,
who wasn't always of joy,
sometimes even eerie.
who sometimes worried about a boy.

But of course, perfection isn't possible
And for that, I am thankful.

But what if she was all a thorn?
Not much fun either, I bet.
All she'd do is cry and scorn.
Never happy, always upset.

Not enjoyable either, now you see.
But, you're still thinking,aren't you?
How is Raven a rose, what possibility?
For those who don't know, I'll happily show.

Raven is smart.
Kind as well.
She has a big heart,
and is not your common belle.

With intentions sweet,
and words sometimes unkind,
Raven can do any amazing feat.
I'm glad, she's a friend of mine.

Every rose has a thorn,
every thorn a rose,
Always there to scorn,
But always there with praise she bestows.



WOOW. You've got talent for making poems.
I'm jealous. Embarassed
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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Rinisa on 11/13/2009, 4:44 pm

EllaMila1 wrote:
abreu7 wrote:
Raven the Rose

Raven is rose.
Pretty, and love adorned
But if she's the girl you chose,
Careful. Every rose has a thorn.

If Raven was simply a rose,
It'd be terrible, don't you know?
Always happy, and beauty grows
Near perfection, complete with a halo.

But what is perfection?
Never sad? Never dreary?
Now pay attention.
I would rather have a friend who grew weary,
who wasn't always of joy,
sometimes even eerie.
who sometimes worried about a boy.

But of course, perfection isn't possible
And for that, I am thankful.

But what if she was all a thorn?
Not much fun either, I bet.
All she'd do is cry and scorn.
Never happy, always upset.

Not enjoyable either, now you see.
But, you're still thinking,aren't you?
How is Raven a rose, what possibility?
For those who don't know, I'll happily show.

Raven is smart.
Kind as well.
She has a big heart,
and is not your common belle.

With intentions sweet,
and words sometimes unkind,
Raven can do any amazing feat.
I'm glad, she's a friend of mine.

Every rose has a thorn,
every thorn a rose,
Always there to scorn,
But always there with praise she bestows.



WOOW. You've got talent for making poems.
I'm jealous. Embarassed

Thanks! But as I said, I don't think I did THAT good.

PS I love your avatar Ella! :D

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by EllaMila1 on 11/14/2009, 6:15 am

abreu7 wrote:
EllaMila1 wrote:
abreu7 wrote:
Raven the Rose

Raven is rose.
Pretty, and love adorned
But if she's the girl you chose,
Careful. Every rose has a thorn.

If Raven was simply a rose,
It'd be terrible, don't you know?
Always happy, and beauty grows
Near perfection, complete with a halo.

But what is perfection?
Never sad? Never dreary?
Now pay attention.
I would rather have a friend who grew weary,
who wasn't always of joy,
sometimes even eerie.
who sometimes worried about a boy.

But of course, perfection isn't possible
And for that, I am thankful.

But what if she was all a thorn?
Not much fun either, I bet.
All she'd do is cry and scorn.
Never happy, always upset.

Not enjoyable either, now you see.
But, you're still thinking,aren't you?
How is Raven a rose, what possibility?
For those who don't know, I'll happily show.

Raven is smart.
Kind as well.
She has a big heart,
and is not your common belle.

With intentions sweet,
and words sometimes unkind,
Raven can do any amazing feat.
I'm glad, she's a friend of mine.

Every rose has a thorn,
every thorn a rose,
Always there to scorn,
But always there with praise she bestows.



WOOW. You've got talent for making poems.
I'm jealous. Embarassed

Thanks! But as I said, I don't think I did THAT good.

PS I love your avatar Ella! :D

No? I can't make such poems. never been good at it. xD

And thanks! Yeah, it was love at first sight. xDD
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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Rain on 11/24/2009, 4:24 pm

The Poem was enjoyable ^_^
Perhaps someday I will share one of mine with you.

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Rinisa on 11/24/2009, 5:10 pm

Rain_of_Tears wrote:The Poem was enjoyable ^_^
Perhaps someday I will share one of mine with you.

Thanks. I'd love to read one of your poems!

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Terra on 11/28/2009, 8:53 pm

abreu7 wrote:A poem about a saying I've heard...(Some complain roses have thorns, others rejoice that thorns have roses.)

Raven the Rose

Raven is rose.
Pretty, and love adorned
But if she's the girl you chose,
Careful. Every rose has a thorn.

If Raven was simply a rose,
It'd be terrible, don't you know?
Always happy, and beauty grows
Near perfection, complete with a halo.

But what is perfection?
Never sad? Never dreary?
Now pay attention.
I would rather have a friend who grew weary,
who wasn't always of joy,
sometimes even eerie.
who sometimes worried about a boy.

But of course, perfection isn't possible
And for that, I am thankful.

But what if she was all a thorn?
Not much fun either, I bet.
All she'd do is cry and scorn.
Never happy, always upset.

Not enjoyable either, now you see.
But, you're still thinking,aren't you?
How is Raven a rose, what possibility?
For those who don't know, I'll happily show.

Raven is smart.
Kind as well.
She has a big heart,
and is not your common belle.

With intentions sweet,
and words sometimes unkind,
Raven can do any amazing feat.
I'm glad, she's a friend of mine.

Every rose has a thorn,
every thorn a rose,
Always there to scorn,
But always there with praise she bestows.


For those who don't get it, I'm saying how everybody has a good side and a bad side. But it doesn't matter, as long as you keep them balanced. I chose Raven because, she was only born to be a portal but was still hopeful, and happy (Even if she hid it.) I hope you liked it, as I don't think it came out that well.

This is sooo good! :D nicely written!

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Rinisa on 11/28/2009, 9:24 pm

Terra wrote:
This is sooo good! :D nicely written!

Thanks! ^^

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Tÿ on 11/28/2009, 9:27 pm

awesome

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Music_Hero2779 on 11/28/2009, 9:58 pm

OMG THAT ROCKS!! ur a poet and people who read this know it! Anyway I like it... :D

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Rain on 12/5/2009, 2:38 pm

icegal2779 wrote:OMG THAT ROCKS!! ur a poet and people who read this know it! Anyway I like it... :D
What's up with the dragon eggs?

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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by archiesangel on 12/5/2009, 6:20 pm

Awesome poem!
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Re: My Poem: Raven the Rose

Post by Music_Hero2779 on 12/6/2009, 10:53 pm

Rain_of_Tears wrote:
icegal2779 wrote:OMG THAT ROCKS!! ur a poet and people who read this know it! Anyway I like it... :D
What's up with the dragon eggs?
They r kool...

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