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Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 12:43 pm

archiesangel wrote: I think we could do without the swearing.

but the swearing was so cool!
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Post by archiesangel on 9/6/2009, 12:45 pm

Mercy wrote:
archiesangel wrote: I think we could do without the swearing.

but the swearing was so cool!

If we were making a rated R movie. For a fan fic, I'm not so sure that would go over so well...
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Post by Naked Snake on 9/6/2009, 12:45 pm

Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It

Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 12:50 pm

Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

exactly!! <3
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Post by Rianna Lauren on 9/6/2009, 12:53 pm

Mercy wrote:
Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

exactly!! <3

well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.

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Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 12:57 pm

Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

exactly!! <3

well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.

Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.

Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It

Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 12:57 pm

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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It

Post by Rianna Lauren on 9/6/2009, 1:00 pm

Mercy wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

exactly!! <3

well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.

Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.

Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
I see... Well, moving on, then.

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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It

Post by Thecrazykid3649 on 9/6/2009, 1:01 pm

Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

exactly!! <3

well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.

Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.

Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
I see... Well, moving on, then.
In other news, pluto is no longer a planet. poor lil frozen pluto! Sad lol

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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It

Post by Naked Snake on 9/6/2009, 1:02 pm

Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

exactly!! <3

well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.

Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.

Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
I see... Well, moving on, then.
In other news, pluto is no longer a planet. poor lil frozen pluto! Sad lol

...That was a joke about old news being old, yes?

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Re: Shameless Self-Promition: I Has It

Post by Vandal on 9/6/2009, 1:05 pm

Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Mercy wrote:
Naked Snake wrote:Yeah, swearing adds a touch of realism. What, we're to assume a teenager is going to call someone "barf-brain" or "scuzz-guzzler" and now "smarmy sack of sh*t"?

exactly!! <3

well, "barf-brain" and "pit-sniffers" are typical Gizmo stuff, but sh*t? Well... Different stories have different ratings, I supposed.

Its like if they were actual teenagers. All my friends cuss and I'm homeschooled so I can't cuss. It would be fun to. But then I'd be a sailor, and everyone knows I'd rather be a space pirate.

Anyways I think if actual teens went into the criminal lifestyle they'd cuss.
I see... Well, moving on, then.
In other news, pluto is no longer a planet. poor lil frozen pluto! Sad lol

Pluto is still a planet to me!!
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Post by Rianna Lauren on 9/6/2009, 1:06 pm

So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:

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Post by Thecrazykid3649 on 9/6/2009, 1:07 pm

Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:

Twas a subject change. alien

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Post by Rianna Lauren on 9/6/2009, 1:08 pm

Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:

Twas a subject change. alien

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Post by Thecrazykid3649 on 9/6/2009, 1:13 pm

Rianna Lauren wrote:
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:

Twas a subject change. alien

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Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol

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Post by Rianna Lauren on 9/6/2009, 1:21 pm

Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:

Twas a subject change. alien

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Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol

:lol!:

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Post by Vandal on 9/13/2009, 11:18 pm

Rianna Lauren wrote:
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:

Twas a subject change. alien

Rolling Eyes

Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol

:lol!:
:lol!: <--- is that like.. Goku hair..?

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Post by Rianna Lauren on 9/14/2009, 4:59 am

Mercy wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:
Thecrazykid3649 wrote:
Rianna Lauren wrote:So.. What does Pluto have anything to do with all this? XD :lol!:

Twas a subject change. alien

Rolling Eyes

Don'tchoo roll yo eyes at me lil gurl! i'll get limweechie on u!!!! XDDDD lol

:lol!:
:lol!: <--- is that like.. Goku hair..?

yesh XD

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Post by Cylor on 9/27/2009, 9:53 am

Interesting work, Snake. Your style is quite promising, and has improved noticeably from your earlier efforts. Very good characterization as well, and the comedy bits were genuinely funny.

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